NPR writer Laura Conaway wants to know if the following paragraph, from the New York Times, can be rescued.

Yet deep down in his soul, the transplant will hold on to the notion that umbrellas are to be used only as protection against the rain, which is wet and, when it drenches the clothes and skin, makes one uncomfortable.

What do you think, gang? I’ll give you all a day to offer your suggestions in the comments section, then I’ll have a bash. Although to perfectly honest I don’t really know where to start.

Thanks to our twitter friend, Evolution London (a.k.a. Aliya), for the link.